Pretty words I wrote,
penned, gift wrapped and delivered,
compliments of me.
~ Andrew
I don’t really do Haiku often but it’s nice to experiment with new styles, I hope you enjoyed the simplicity, I’m not a Haiku-er so this was outside the comfort zone, the first time I went outside my comfort zone was with Pigeons so that’ll be my poem of the day for you to maybe enjoy š
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HAHAHAHAHA!!! This is hilarious Andrew! Seriously….
I can’t top that either….
not even going to try š
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I don’t write haikus on a regular basis, but I do tend to reach for that style when I want simplicity that still holds power š You’ve mastered both here. I especially liked how you used the syllables in the second line, you were able to get in so many thoughts in just 7 syllables
You should try writing in haiku more š What tends to be your comfort zone; free verse?
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I was rather proud of that second line honestly š I do prefer free verse though š Thanks for the feedback, I’ll be sure to try my hand at a few more š
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I prefer free verse as well š However most of my NaPo has been discovering and using different styles I’ve never even heard before xD
Have a good day~
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I’ve not been following any prompts however I’m going into styles I usually don’t use, have a great day too, thanks š
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Perfect Andrew!
I love the rhythm of the Haiku!
You rocked it my friend š
Sherri-Ellen
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Thank you! I thought it would be nice to at least try it once, I’m glad you enjoyed it š
Andrew
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I think you would be a great Haiku-ist Poet Andrew.
Mine are always a bit ‘off’. Now my Nanna coudl write up a “Haiku storm!”
Sherri-Ellen
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I remember the first haiku someone showed me made me laugh,
Haiku are easy,
But some just don’t make much sense
Refrigerator
Never attempted to write one because nothing could beat that :p
Andrew
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